We want quite a casual and energetic (inspo 1) feeling video of someone in their late 20s (and over) talking into the camera about how our service is a must for council or housing association tenants dealing with issues of disrepair in their home and are being ignored by their landlords. Ideally from the perspective of someone who has either gone through it or can relate on some level as a tenant and a parent (because kids, elderly or sick people are more at risk from issues like damp and mould etc). The Background should also be causal, could be a bedroom, on the stairs, a kids room, going for a walk etc.
Our aim is to empower council and housing-association tenants. We help tenants who are being ignored by councils or housing association get their home repaired and claim compensation for any inconvenience caused by issues of disrepair without risk of eviction.
We can help with:
Tenants can check their eligibility for free on our website (not yet live) but we can provide an interactive build for creators to interact with or recordings if the website is not live.
Please create a script that is natural and authentic to you!
Hook ideas:
You can enforce your legal right to repairs and claim compensation for any inconvenience caused by disrepair, without risk of eviction. [Should have green screen effect to display displaying list of disrepair issues or text overlay to list issues]
All you need to do is go on TheHousingClaimsline.com [ greenscreen effect showing the website as it is being used - see inspo link 2 @24sec ]
They help everyday tenants like you and me who are dealing with disrepair issues. Just fill out a quick online form letting them know what the issues are [Greenscreen - skip to selecting disrepair from the options questions]...
…how long you've been waiting for repairs [Greenscreen - skip to question about how long its been since first report ]
...and take a few photos, [Greenscreen - skip to showing the option to take photos - (could possibly cut to a clip showing you taking photos)].
submit and someone will be in touch [greenscreen - showing submitting and thank you page]
Yes, It really is that simple [switch back to normal video of self]
Check out the link on this video or visit thehousingClaimsline.com to check your eligibility. Thank me later!
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We'd also like to go ahead with 6 additional hooks. Same hook each time but "council and housing association" is replaced with the following list respectively.
(If you're a "Clarion housing" tenant who has been ignored and forced to live in dangerous conditions... your landlord is hoping you do not know this critical piece of information!)
Our aim is to empower council and housing-association tenants. We help tenants who are being ignored by councils or housing association get their home repaired and claim compensation for any inconvenience caused by issues of disrepair.
We can help with:
Damp and mould, Pest Infestation
Flooding and Leaks
Roofs, Windows, gutters issues etc.
Property and Structural Defects
Electrical Issues
Boiler and Heating Issues
We don't think there are any competitors doing it quite right. Lots of competitors go with the generic text over stock photos. We want a nice and engaging video with a human touch.
We want a confident and energetic tone of voice to raise the spirits of our target audience. We want to relate to the every day matured tenant, late 20s and above. We want to focus on family safety in the home and the potential dangers of unresolved housing disrepair issues in their homes (especially for kids, elderly or the sick). We want them to feel empowered knowing they don't have to put up with it and a solution exists - The housing Claimsline.
We don't think there are any competitors doing it quite right. Lots of competitors go with the generic text over stock photos. We want a nice and engaging video with a human touch.