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Hey Roberta! Thank you so much for your video; the energy is perfect and we love the pacing and how organic it feels. Just a few amends if this is okay: - The section between 0:11 and 0:27 where you're packing other items could be cut down significantly so you're talking about Skin So Soft sooner - Can you specifically mention the bottle sizes at 0:37 - "these come in 250ml, 150ml, and the 100ml travel size" - Please can you say that "it contains jojoba oil (pronounced ho-ho-ba) and is scented with Citronellol" - At the end of the video, please can you mention the pricepoint? The travel size is under Ā£5 etc - Can you also please end the video explaining ways to shop? "Online, at Superdrug, or via an Avon Rep". Thanks so much!

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