Cher: Second shot – lighting is too dark to make out all the bottles Last shot – voiceover could be better On the second video clip (in all variants) we’d request Cher swaps the shot of her child putting their finger in the pot for one of the children actually taking the gummy out of the pot On the final clip in all videos, request the video is flipped so product is the correct way round General tone – we’d like if Cher could make her tone more upbeat! Minions – we’d like it if Cher talks up the collaboration more Video 4 – voiceover feels rushed, we’d like her to re-record and slow down the pace of her VoiceOver