Hey Pippa! Again - your video is top notch, thank you so much for your hard work. This hits the brief bang on! I just have a couple more amends from the client if this is okay, keeping the video under 1 minute also.: - At the end of the video, please can you say 'You can shop Skin So Soft online, at Superdrug, or via an Avon Rep' - at 0:31, can you say "it contains jojoba oil and is scented with citronellol' Other than that it looks absolutely fabulous!