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Revision requested
Submitted on
July 16, 2024
Revision request
Hey Pippa! - Whilst you are “thinking” about the game, please could we add a shot of the Instant Win game on the phone being shown? - Do you happen to have any additional footage from the supermarket? Our client likes the concept but feels that the celebrating looks a little unnatural. We can cut out the “I won, I won” and just have you celebrating if you think this would feel more natural. Maybe less is more in this instance? Thanks so much - please let me know if you have any q’s!

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