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Revised
Submitted on
July 19, 2024
Revision request
"Hello Genesis! Thank you so much for the awesome video! I really enjoyed it and have a few friendly suggestions to make it even better: 1. It would be great if your voice and your partner’s voice are at the same level. 2. There’s a bit of echo, which makes it hard to understand. Can we reduce that for better clarity? 3. For the visuals, it would look nice if your partner could show photos of his dining experience on his phone (you can find any dinner atmosphere photo on Pinterest for example). The camera should zoom in on the hand holding the phone. 4. Similarly, you could show a DCB piece on your phone. We can send you a DCB piece in a living room setting or you can choose any piece from the website. While showing it, you could add, "Look how nice it looks!" and the camera should zoom in on your hand holding the phone. Thanks again for your effort, Genesis! I’m excited to see the updated version.”

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