Hey Charissa! Thanks so much for submitting your video - the overall tone is great and super friendly and organic. A few amends if this is okay: - Can we change the background between 0:01-0:05 as the notes are covered so it's a little disjointed - could we perhaps change it to a screenshot of the travel sized bottle including the price? - The part at 0:05- 0:14 is a little slow-paced - I'd be tempted to remove and go straight to the Skin So Soft. - At 0:30, please can you say 'enriched with jojoba oil and scented with Citronella' - Can you also please say 'soft and smooth' rather than 'soft, smooth, and protected' - Avon's legal team want to be careful about using the word 'protected' as we can't allude to the insect repellant (this is an error in the brief, not your fault!) Thanks so much!