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July 23, 2024
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Hi Magdalena, we love the video! The overall style and narrative is great, there are just a couple of edits that we would like to make to align with our messaging. - 0:08: Please avoid quoting a specific price for your train ticket like "mes billets ne me coute pas plus de 25€'" as we are not allowed to mention a specific price. If we could change this to something like "Mais depuis un certain temps, j'ai trouvé les meilleurs prix garantis", or whatever you think is best without mentioning a monetary amount. - Please remove the section at 0:20-0:21 where you say "Et les prix sont vraiment raisonnables" because we are not allowed to say this. It should be fine to go straight from where you say "en France et meme en Europe" to "et ce qui est dingue". I hope that's ok and thanks for what you have produced so far, it's looking really good!

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