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Submitted on
July 13, 2024
Revision request
Hi Charlotte, I think we are almost there on this one too! - It’s quite hard to tell the difference on what the Big Win scenes are vs the before as they look quite similar. Could we potentially reorder the clips and have videos of you in the white before hand and in the coat/glasses after - hoping this will make it a little easier. - Could we possibly change the clip of the house out to a car? It’s a little hard to tell what you're looking at. - If it’s not too much trouble any additional “after” scenes you can add to the end (in the coat) would be great too to make the video that little bit longer. Thanks so much - please let me know if you have any q’s!

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