Hey Liv, This looks so much better. We are almost there! Here are some final point from the client. It would be amazing if you could look into this :) - Missed key points from the script that are selling points for PDOL, e.g. subscription and vet approved - We have a second variant on hook and captions needed for the final product. - reduce the time spent on showing the food being spooned out, doesn’t look appetising! Spend more time on giving dog the food and the dog eating/enjoying it - Lighting is bad when you show the frontline packet, could this be done in a bright kitchen vs a against a wall? - Same for when they show Droncit, the second clip is better when the dog sniffs it - Show the grooming products before you start the grooming shots - Use the outdoor grooming clip and close up of brushing the ear only, the other grooming shots miss - Show a better close up of the screen, it’s angled and very bright so can barely see it, try to get pet drugs online logo in there